3 Tips for Teaching Editing

3 Tips for Teaching Editing in the Secondary English Language Arts Classroom
As an English teacher, I find few things more cringe-worthy than looking over a student’s paper and seeing they’ve made easily avoidable mistakes. Such errors might include forgetting to capitalize a name, using “your” when they meant “you’re”, or even misspelling the title of the book they spent several days reading. I feel that the reason that most of these problems arise is that students place all their energies in getting the assignment finished and avoid investing time in the art of revising.

Here are three tips I hope you will pass along to your students on how to become better editors and turn in more polished papers.

3 Tips for Teaching Editing in the Secondary English Language Arts Classroom1. Read for a specific error
I speak from personal experience from back when I was a student that a lot of grammatical errors are overlooked because students only reread their writing once. They place too much trust in themselves that they can find every error in a single scan. While it is likely they will find the majority of errors that first time, it is equally likely that several mistakes will fly under their radar and lower their grade. To avoid missing out on easy points , students should reread their papers at least three times, each time looking for a specific error. For example, the first read could be for punctuation, the next one for grammar, and a third time for checking that the assignment answers the prompt without tangents. By looking for specific errors, a student’s editing will be more focused and thus more likely to catch simple mistakes.

2. Get a fresh pair of eyes
I remember writing once for a school assignment -much to my embarrassment- “must of” when I meant “must’ve.” The biggest pitfall with self-editing is that our brains trick us into believing we wrote what we meant to write, essentially making our errors invisible to us. It can be helpful to ask someone you trust to take a look at your paper after you carefully self-edited. It is also beneficial to ask your reader if he/she could follow your line of thinking in answering the assignment prompt and readability. This is where peer editing helps students produce better writing.

3. Read your paper out loud
Earlier I mentioned how self-editing can be tricky because our brains have the tendency to read what we meant to write. To avoid such editorial entanglements, instruct students to read their papers aloud to themselves. When a student verbalizes their writing, they are more likely to catch grammatical errors because they won’t sound right when spoken. It might even be beneficial to students to present their essay to the class in the form of a speech as part of an in-class editing session.

Three Short Stories Every High Schooler Should Read

3 short stories every high school student should read
Whoever coined the term, “Brevity is the the soul of wit” must have had short stories in mind. I love teaching and reading short stories in class because talented authors can create truly powerful messages and themes in just a few scant pages, all of which can be read and discussed within a single class period. Here are three short stories which I believe every high schooler should read.
3 short stories every high school student should read
Everything That Rises Must Converge by Flannery O’ Connor
This short story revolves around a recent college graduate, Julian, who is escorting his mother to her exercise classes because she is too afraid to take the bus alone after integration of African Americans into white society. O’Connor masterfully portrays the perspectives of the two generations: the mother’s blatant racism and how her views are stuck in the past and Julian’s more progressive, yet still superficial rationalization of reality. What makes this story so compelling is how it reveals to the reader how liking or “respecting” someone simply for their appearance is not much better than hating them for it and how prejudice is not always blatantly recognizable.
3 short stories every high school student should read
There Will Come Soft Rains by Ray Bradbury
It is difficult to pick one gem out of the treasure trove that is the collection of short stories by Ray Bradbury, but I found this story especially powerful as well as haunting. The story involves a fully-automated house which goes about its daily duties despite having no inhabitants to tend to. It is slowly revealed through post-apocalyptic imagery that the house, and in fact, the whole neighborhood, was decimated by nuclear war leaving nothing behind but charred remains and a radioactive glow. Come evening time, the house performs a reading of one of its former  inhabitants favorite poems, There Will Come Soft Rains, which describes how nature will continue on even after mankind has killed itself off. The story is a vivid reminder of how mankind’s legacy is sure to outlive us all, which might not necessarily be a good thing.

I use this There Will Come Soft Rains Short Story Activities resource in my classroom when I teach the story. I also use these Ray Bradbury Bell Ringers to get my students thinking about the themes and motifs he includes in his writing.

The Necklace by Guy de Maupassant
Much like the previously mentioned Flannery O’Connor story, The Necklace expounds on the theme of judging by appearances as well as warning against the pitfalls of seeking happiness in material wealth. The story revolves around Mathilde Loisel, a woman who constantly bemoans her lowly economic status as she believes her charm and beauty are more deserving of the upper echelons of high society. When her overly-accommodating husband manages to gain an invitation to a formal ball, Mathilde splurges on a dress and borrows a piece of jewelry from one of her wealthy friends: a beautiful diamond necklace. The necklace proves to be the central symbol surrounding the story’s theme as well as Mathilde’s downfall.

Here is my Activities Bundle for The Necklace.


Lord of the Flies Map Project

Lord of the Flies map project with close reading and analysis.
I recently assigned my students a project for Lord of the Flies where they had to compile evidence from the novel to create a map of the island setting within the novel, and it was one of the most magical days in my classroom so far this year.

I gave my students only one day to complete this map project in class, and every single student was participating, thinking critically, and looking for clues within the text to help with the project.

Lord of the Flies map project with close reading and analysis.
In order to create such a successful day in the classroom, I front-loaded this activity quite extensively. About a week and a half before the map making activity, I instructed my students to record quotations about the setting and layout of the island. They recorded quotes and page numbers, and they also sketched out some of the setting as we read. As a bell-ringer on one of the days before the assignment, I assigned a couple pages from the novel as close reading and had my students write down two examples of imagery that vividly described the setting. At the end of the bell-ringer, several students shared their findings with the class.

We completed this assignment after reading the first three chapters of the novel. I wanted to assign this project early enough that it would help students understand the layout of the island, but I also wanted to make sure that they had enough text to work with.

Before actually assigning the map project, I made sure that my students were ready for the assignment and that they had enough details. Since so many maps of the island are available online, I wanted to make this an assignment that was solely based on textual evidence, and the only way to ensure that students didn’t look at examples online was to have this project be an in-class, one-day assignment.
My class worked in small groups of four to six students. In addition to producing a colorful and textually-accurate map, each group also had to complete a chart with properly cited quotes, and then match up those quotes to the details on the map.

At any given time in the class, there was always something to do. Students could look for details in the text, or they could write the quotes on the chart, or they could draw details on the map, or they could color the map. Every student was engaged, actively participating, and interacting with the text.

After the assignment was over, I used the maps and the masks my students created as another project to create a bulletin board for the rest of the unit of study. You can download the FREE Lord of the Flies bulletin board letters for your classroom HERE. Both the Lord of the Flies Map Project and Mask Project are included in my Lord of the Flies Teaching Unit.


The Most Confusing Punctuation and How to Use Them

The Most Confusing Punctuation and How to Use Them
After reading thousands of essays, quick writes, and classroom assignments throughout my teaching career, I’ve noticed a trend in student writing: students have a difficult time with properly punctuation their papers. This is especially true for punctuation that goes beyond end marks and commas. Here are the most commonly misused forms of punctuation I have found while reading student papers along with suggestions for how to best use them.

Colons :

Colons can do so much more than separate hours from minutes. They bring emphasis to a word or phrase while cutting down on clutter. As an example I could write:

There was only one thing that could make Mary happy today: a tub of Ben and Jerry’s slathered with chocolate syrup.

The colon makes the reader take notice of what comes next and even helps keep down my word count by taking place of the word “namely” or similar transitional phrases.  But it can still do more: it can separate a title from a subtitle, it can provide emphasis for a word or phrase; it can present a quotation, but most commonly, it is used to introduce lists, as I have just done.

Dashes -

The dash is much like a colon in that it brings emphasis to what follows. Most grammarians state that the dash’s power to provide emphasis is one step above a comma while still a step below a colon. Dashes are best used for embedding a thought in the middle of a sentence:

Mary’s children - all ten of them - struggled to find a place to sit in the back of the cramped minivan.

Or for providing a conclusion to a sentence:

Mary took a deep breath, opened her eyes, and stared down at the pregnancy test - positive.

Semicolons ;

The semicolon, best known for its role in the winky emoticon, ;-) , is probably the most misused form of punctuation by students, and honestly I can’t blame them. The semicolon is tricky because it is literally both a period and a comma at the same time, making a casual writer question if it is supposed to serve as a short breath between thoughts or a complete stop.

From my own writing experience, I like to think of the semicolon as a stronger version of the comma. I use the semicolon to link two independent clauses, thoughts that can stand as their own sentences, to show a close relationship between the two ideas. For example:

Some people think that the semicolon is esoteric and pretentious; I think it is versatile.

Semicolons are also useful for avoiding confusion in lists that use a lot of commas:

Most people today think the semicolon is either outdated, confusing, or useless; but others, mostly English teachers, still see its value.

For aesthetic reasons, the semicolon can also be used for preventing the overuse of commas in a paragraph or sentence. Have your students play around with this piece of punctuation to see how it can help spice up their writing.


Thankful to be a Teacher

Reasons why I am Thankful to be a Teacher
When I was younger, I never thought I would be a teacher. Sure, I used to play school with my younger cousins and siblings when I was younger. I would even draw out worksheets and write questions for them to answer about books I read or PBS shows I taped on a VHS cassette especially for my “school”, but I never gave a thought to teaching as a profession. Not once in high school, or college, or even in my first couple years after college did I ever think I would be a teacher.

Reasons why I am Thankful to be a Teacher
I wanted to work in media and communications, and I began my professional career in public relations working the high-tech circuit. I had many big-name tech companies as clients. I wrote press releases and organized media tours. I even traveled throughout the US and abroad assisting my clients in their media need. I loved working in this demanding field, but it didn’t fulfill me in the way that I always dreamt a career should.

After working for a few years in the private sector, I decided to make a change in my life. I decided to become a teacher. I went back to school and earned my teaching credential (in California, you must earn this after completing your baccalaureate degree) and my Master’s in Education during the middle of a recession. Teaching jobs were scarce, but I was very fortunate and I was hired to begin work the very next school year.

Several years have passed since my first year as a high school English teacher. I remember all of the struggles that came with being a first, a second, and even a third-year teacher. But even in those first few, and quite challenging, years, I remember how lucky and grateful I was for having the wonderful opportunity to be a teacher -especially a teacher in a low socioeconomic area where the odds were stacked against my students. I was thankful for the opportunity to make a difference and contribute something positive to society.

So this Thanksgiving break I am reflecting on everything for which I am thankful. And I must say, we teachers sure have a lot to be thankful for. Yes, the job can be challenging and stressful and downright tedious at time, but reaching just one child and making a true difference in just one child’s life makes all of the stress worthwhile.

  • I am thankful for my students who teach me new things every day.
  • I am thankful for my students because they make me laugh.
  • I am thankful for being challenged every day.
  • I am thankful for being able to share beautiful stories and poems with a new generation.
  • I am thankful that I have the opportunity to give back to communities.
  • I am thankful that I work in a great district that supports all students and teachers.
  • I am thankful that I can build a positive rapport with students.
  • I am thankful that I can teach kindness, forgiveness, and acceptance.
  • I am thankful for all of the wonderful parents who support my decisions in the classroom.
  • I am thankful for the opportunity to see 150 beautiful, smiling faces each day and call them my kids.
Reasons why I am Thankful to be a Teacher
There are so many things to be thankful for this Thanksgiving holiday, and being a teacher is definitely one of them.